
Finally. After a week of struggle, forcing my way through 632 pages of very small print, I have, at last, finished The Mysteries of Udolpho. I feel ambivalent about this novel; I think it’s fair to say that overall, I sort of enjoyed it, but the prevailing thoughts in my mind as I read this were of exasperation and irritation. Not exactly a favourable review, but let me explain.
On the back of my copy, it says that this novel, which was published in 1794, employs an “imaginative use of history, poetry, landscape and the supernatural.” This is part of the problem. Despite that, this was a huge success at the time, the author, Anne Radcliffe, earning £500 for the copyright (authors of standard circulating-library novels earned £10 or perhaps £20). Had I been born in the 1770s, and had read The Mysteries in my 20s, I am positive I would have adored it. My situation, however, remaining firmly in the twenty-first century, I have several issues with the heroine, Emily St Aubert, and her general demeanour.
Emily has been bought up by her mamma and papa very well; they have taught her the virtues of modesty and piety and general adorableness. She has been well-educated, and has had an idyllic childhood, surrounded by people who love her. As it tells me this on the back of my book, so I have no scruples in telling you this, her mother dies fairly early on, so Emily and her father go on a little holiday in the mountains to distract themselves from their woe. They don’t do a very good job, and here comes my main complaint – they cry all the time. Not just from sorrow, and not just because of the mothers’ death. The characters cry when they see beautiful scenery. They cry when they reflect on how lucky they are. They cry when they reflect on how unlucky they are. They cry when they fall in love. They cry when they are separated. They cry when they are reunited. They cry when they are happy. They cry when they are frightened. All the men cry, or if they are trying to be a bit more masculine, sigh sorrowfully. Emily, in particular, cries the most. And when she is not crying, she is fainting. It is this insipidness of character that surprises me so. Perhaps I am used to the more feisty Victorian woman – even the most “Angel in the House” characters tend to display some sort of nerve. Emily shows little courage, and little strength. The smallest shock renders her unable to speak. And despite (or perhaps, because of) her feebleness, virtually every man she encounters falls in love with her (or, in the case of the more disreputable men, want to have their wicked way with her). What kind of heroine is that?
But it isn’t just Radcliffe’s way of writing that makes Emily so colourless– Annette, Emily’s maid when she is imprisoned in the deliciously Gothic and unsettling Castle of Udolpho – is talkative and likeable. She actually has a believable character – easily frightened and superstitious, slightly silly and very loving and affectionate. Emily seems a rather two-dimensional image of what a woman ought to be, while Annette, who, in comparison, is a minor character, brims with warmth.
The reason that this took me so long to read was its pace. The first half of the novel is fairly slow – that took me at least three days to read. The second half I managed in a day and a half. Radcliffe’s use of “poetry and landscape” slows the plot down so very much, I wanted to weep. While this was possibly quite thrilling to contemporary readers, her rapturous descriptions of the Pyrenees (often accompanied by Emily snivelling with joy), that quite literally go on for pages, moved me very little. Similarly, the poems that Emily often amuses herself with composing whilst sitting, picturesquely on her own, hold no fascination for me. Titled with cutesy names such as “The Glow-Worm” “The Pilgrim” “The Sea-Nymph”, the lines are dully sentimental and make me want to hit my head against a wall. However, once Emily is effectively a prisoner, things start looking up. Yes, she still cries, but at least with vaguely good reason. Radcliffe really manages to create a sinister mood of suspense that pervades Udolpho and its gloomy corridors. The famous and dreaded “black veil” in a locked-up room (the very one that is so parodied in Jane Austen’s Northanger Abbey) hides something so horrific that Emily faints (obviously) and cannot bring herself to mention again. This mystery, along with all the other supernatural happenings, are all explained satisfactorily in a way that I applaud. Unlike other Gothic authors, Radcliffe does not allow a ghost to be a ghost; an all too terrestrial explanation is available, sometimes in most unexpected and exciting ways.
The excitement really kicks off, however, very close to the end, when Radcliffe seems to get to grips with the art of the cliffhanger. She starts following different plotlines to great effect, and more than once I reached the end of a gripping chapter, to turn eagerly to the next, and find her teasingly serene words describing an event far away from the one I wanted to read about. As with many of the novels of this period, the overall ending is a rounded off, satisfactory one. All mysteries explained, all obstacles overcome. Tears all around.
Something that interested me was the rather trite moral Radcliffe felt obliged to add at the end. “Though the vicious can sometimes pour affliction on the good”, she writes, “their power is transient and their punishment certain. …Innocence, though oppressed by injustice, shall, supported by patience, finally triumph over misfortune!” Perhaps in her Gothic world of tyrannous Counts, kindly nuns, wilting young ladies, valiant chevaliers, dastardly banditti and faithful servants, this is true. Sadly, in our world, it is not.
I realise that this article is fairly condemning of what is, after all, a magnificent piece of literature. I am perfectly aware that I have become ensnared in minute details that, to another reader, might go unnoticed. It is considered one of the greats of Gothic fiction, and so I urge the gentle reader to attempt it. My only piece of advice : do not be put off by the crying and the scenery. It gets better.




